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    Hello XPG Members, I been working on my signature for the last 30 minutes. I want to know what you guys think about it. I personally really like it but I wanted to see if you guys do as well, Both positive and negative feedback is accepted! :)
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    Hiya bud,


    Good attempt, sadly for me theres too much going on with in the signature no real point of focus and the light area is too wide to drag your eyes across from one area to another with out any purpose, you want to make one area as a main focus point for the image and then have your text as either blended in to the image or as a focal point before the image is viewed by being the main light and focus point.

    Hope this comes across as i mean it to which is just genuine constructive criticism. Hope it helps in some way and pushes you to want to know more information.

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    Thanks for the feedback, I personally wasn't looking to make anything perfect , I was just trying to make something simple that would look nice. This was just my rough draft I guess you can say, I have starter working on another one , in which I will fix the lighting and maybe add some flares to make the text stand out!
     
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    Heres a few examples of ones i have done previously as i said if you keep a item as the main light source and your text either as a secondary focal point or the main focal point it makes the signatures a lot easier to make when your first starting out - thats before having to be able to work with massive points of focus.

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    Keep going though and your get there in no point.

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    I revised and I came up with this, is it better?
     
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    a lot better, very well done, could do with a bit of sharpening on the image and fading of the outer blur but very good attempt, looks clean and nice. well done.
     
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    How did you make it that way bro I'm going to try to make one this week that is xpg similar.
     
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    Photoshop CC.
     
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