Listen to my new song and leave feedback

KingjlwHD Jun 17, 2016

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    It's amazing!!
     
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    Its good but at some playces its offbeat..maybe its only me but the mixing is a bit wierd.
     
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    Good flow, bro
     
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    The music has the right organization but, not the right presentation. I think the editing of your voice or simply just the way you are saying the words should be more pronounced and exaggerated. I guess the easiest way to say how this sounds is like when you have a presentation in class and you read off the slides rather than presenting your own knowledge. It doesn't exactly sound like you mean the words you say.

    Hope this helps.
     
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    cool thanks for sharing
     
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    I like it :)
     

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